Draft #1

Put up a vocabulary word.

Daybook quiz on "Permanent Tracings."

Groups discuss Macke, Questions 1, 2 and the first part of 3, all on page 81.

We discuss revision and its three levels:  global, structural and sentence-level.

Everyday Writer worksheet.
Analytical reading?

Then you read each other's drafts.

Homework:

1.  Read "Observing Wolves," the handout.

2.  Complete the Everyday Writer worksheet.

3.  In your daybook describe:  a) What comments readers had for your draft and
b) What you learned through reading other's drafts.

4.  Revise your draft.  Use pages 74-75 to help you.  Draft #2 -- which should be typed -- is due Wednesday.

5.  Two vocabulary words.